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Decidedly Deeks: Fanfic Challenge #1 Stories – Part II

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When Witches Attack by PokeyDotes

October 31

It’s the cheap candy that ruins the holiday. It’s something Deeks had decided long ago, back when Halloween was still all about the candy and the biggest issue was figuring out how to use what was lying around the house as a costume.

Yet, here he stands, hands on hips, head tilted to the side as he glares at the many bags before him. He’s pretty sure candy wasn’t this expensive last year. Hell, he’s almost certain it wasn’t this expensive yesterday. But that’s what he gets for cutting it close, for waiting until the last minute before realizing that all those cheesy advertisements and themed decorations were actually warning him that Halloween was on its way.

He feels his phone vibrate in his pocket, a little chime following right after. He already knows what the text will say, probably the same thing as the last one. Yet, he looks anyway.

Hurry up!

He sends a quick reply, a promise that he’s on his way before returning to the problem at hand. It’s the cheap candy that ruins the holiday, but there’s no way Deeks is spending twenty bucks on a single bag of bite-sized Snickers.

He settles for a couple of bags of the cheaper candy, an un-branded assortment that promises to taste so bad even the companies don’t want to put their names on it. Candy now in hand, he checks his watch, frowns, and heads for the checkout line. That frown morphs into a look of irritation and stunned disbelief as he sees the line before him. It probably wouldn’t be so bad were it not for the older woman sorting through coupons, her giant purse taking up a good portion of the conveyor belt, her slow moving fingers taking up a good portion of everyone’s time.

Deeks closes his eyes, tilts his head back, and takes a deep breath through his nose. He counts to three and then lets it out again. It’s a little trick Sam taught him, a calming technique the SEAL had thought to share during a particularly boring stakeout.

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Happy Halloween, Marty by PokeyDotes

November 1

The wrapper had said “mystery flavor”, and even after three minutes of sucking on the damn thing, the flavor remains a mystery, treading a fine line between grape and gross. The bags of candy are currently spread out on his coffee table, a generous handful hiding in his front pocket.

It’s an unwritten rule, but one still uniformly known in his neighborhood: withhold the candy, and the only thing waiting on you the next day will me a mess and a headache.

The plan had been to catch the bad guy, avoid paper work, and be home in time to pass out candy. But things had not gone according to plan, which is why Deeks is standing outside his front door, barefoot, staring at a mess and fighting back a headache.

The eggshells are brittle, breaking beneath his weight, tickling the pads of his feet. Occasionally, a sharp edge will catch his toe or heel. He simply bites down on the mystery candy, wondering why he hasn’t spit it out yet.

Then there’s the silly string. Brightly colored aerosol goop decorates his door and windows, arranged to spell out some rather creative names and images, most of which would probably make Hetty blush. Toilet paper is tangled in the trees and bushes outside his door, dried bologna slices are sticking to his windows, and something that looks and smells dangerously like dog poo is spread along the railing on the banister.

Candy-deprived teenagers in LA, gotta love ’em.

“This is why I hate Halloween, Monty.” Deeks crushes the candy between his teeth, hands resting on his hips as he studies the damage in detail, the morning light lending a better view than the night before.

Monty simply tilts his head, blinking twice before sniffing at the dried egg splattered along the apartment’s outer wall. Deeks takes in a deep breath, holds it a moment, then lets it out in a heavy huff of air, his lips rattling in a lazy imitation of a motorboat.

A squeaking door hinge and the telltale sound of rubber-soled flip-flops flapping against concrete tell him he’s no longer alone.

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What happens on Halloween by tessinciucy

The man walked along the busy street, crashing against the people dressed up for the night. Halloween had never been his favorite festivity, but this year was special. This year Marty Deeks needed to celebrate. After everything that happened months ago, after the ordeal he went through… hell, after his abduction and subsequent torture, Deeks truly needed to do something with the team. He wanted to celebrate the fact that they were all safe and mostly that things were finally starting to go back to where they were used to be.

He was feeling better, every day he was getting closer to his goal. Every day he was getting closer to be the man he used to be, the Marty Deeks everyone knew. He was aware that he had to work hard to reach the final result, but he was confident that things were headed in the right direction.

So when Sam told everyone that Michelle wanted to throw a little party at their house after their kids had gone trick-or-treating, Deeks had enthusiastically accepted the invitation. The cop genuinely liked Sam’s kids and it seemed that in the last few months, the ex-Seal had started to show him more respect, had started to make an attempt at getting to know him, in spite of their differences. Obviously the fact that the Detective had saved Sam’s and Michelle’s life risking his own, had something to do with it, but he couldn’t complain about it.

Deeks appreciated the big man’s effort and going to the party was his way to show this appreciation.

Too bad that Bates had other plans and had requested his undercover skills for the night. It was supposed to be a quick operation, not lasting any more than three or four days, a week at most, but unfortunately it was going to take place over Halloween and right when he was getting the first symptoms of a flu.

Hetty was not very happy about the whole operation and had voiced her concern to the Chief of Police, but even her influence couldn’t do anything about it.

Callen and Sam had looked at him with a deep frown on their faces as he was explaining every detail of the mission and as soon as he left to go to the precinct to discuss the last preparations with Bates, they went directly to Ops to ask the Wonder Twins to support him, backstopping his alias and doing some logistics.

Kensi was the most reluctant to let him go. She was probably the one who could read him better than anyone else and the one who was aware of the fact that, in spite of his reassurances, he was still suffering from the aftermath of his capture. She was the only one who knew about the nightmares that once in a while, still plagued him and that didn’t allow him to have good night of sleep.

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Decidedly Deeks: Fanfic Challenge #1 Stories – Part I

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Thanks to all the writers who contributed to our first Fanfic Challenge on Decidedly Deeks.
Here are the first three stories… have fun reading them and don’t forget to leave a review to the writer !!
And come back next week for three more…


Scarier than a monster by CALLEN37

He leaned back in his chair, swinging his legs and absentmindedly looking out of the window.

“Today as it is a Friday, and the Halloween party is next week, you are all allowed this afternoon to design your Halloween costumes, the theme for the party is to make your costumes as scary as possible, I want to see them by Wednesday and the scariest one will win a prize.” Mrs. Foster said looking at her class.

As usual there was the eclectic mix of children, the overachievers at the front which were hanging on every word she said. The mid range children who were excited and already starting to chat about the assignment, the ‘hard’ kids those who didn’t really care about what she said and wasn’t paying attention. Then there was him. He was a good kid, he tried hard, but in group activities he tended to close off.

She worried about him, she’d talked to the principal and suggested he call in the parents to find out what was going on with him.

He had sent a note home…he hadn’t been back for a week afterward, when he had come back he’d seemed more withdrawn.

He was a cute kid, six years old, shaggy blond hair and bright inquisitive blue eyes. He loved to solve puzzles, to figure things out, he stood up for the smaller kids against the bigger ones who tended to bully in the playground.

She knew he hung about with some of the poorer kids in school, she knew his family wasn’t as well off as most, hence the idea that they could make their costumes, it should save some money and things easier for those whose parents couldn’t afford to buy ready to wear costumes.

She walked over to him and lent over him, “You need to put all four feet of the chair on the floor to make it work Martin.” She smiled.

“Yes ma’am sorry ma’am.” He replied not meeting her eyes.

“Do you need any help in designing your costume?” she asked.

Martin shook his head, “No Ma’am….I’m coming as the scariest thing I know.” He said he took the paper and wrote his name on the top in a child type scrawl, MARTIN. A. BRANDEL.

He drew a head and two arms. Mrs. Foster sighed at least he was engaging. She knew enough not to send the class letter home which asked for his parents to donate some food or drink or a contribution to the class party, these were always left by his peg on the wall. He never took them home.

The bell rang for the end of the day and Martin shot out of his chair as usual he was the first one out of class. By the time the last child was leaving she looked over to the end of the field to see him as usual scaling the wall at the end to take the shortcut back to his trailer park home. She shook her head reminding herself to try yet again to get him to stop that.

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Pretending by new adventures

“You’re not going?” Kensi asked, a little shocked.

“Nope,” Deeks replied as he stuffed some papers and a laptop into his messenger bag.

“Let me guess. Candy is the number two killer after office chairs. Am I right?” Sam grinned at the shaggy-haired detective next to him.

Deeks shook his head. “Ha, but no. I just don’t see the need to devote an entire evening to dress up.”

“Free drinks? That’s the clincher for me,” Callen remarked.

“See Deeks? Even Callen is in the Halloween spirit.” Kensi looked at her desk mate. “What are you going as, G?”

“I was thinking about a federal agent in tactical gear.”

Kensi shook her head. “That’s cheating.”

“Don’t worry, I’ll get G ready. You take care of your partner, ok? We’ll see you two at 10.” Sam and Callen headed out.

Deeks stood at the entrance of the bullpen. “Can you drop me off at my place before you go out? You, uh, you drove today.”

Kensi nodded and they walked out to her car.

“So you really don’t like Halloween? Too scary for the mighty Marty? HA!” She laughed in that frightening way that only Kensi Blye can do, too amused at her own joke.

“It’s not that I don’t like Halloween. I just don’t see the need to don a costume and go out in public,” Deeks replied matter-of-factly.

Kensi couldn’t leave the conversation at that. “Why? It’s just a night of fun.”

Deeks sighed as he looked over at the woman in the driver’s seat. “You really want to know?” At her affirmative head nod, he continued. “Too many years, too many memories.”

“Too many years of what? Of – HEY! Watch where you’re going Batman!” Kensi yelled out the open window. A group of super heroes clumsily wandered across the street in front of Kensi’s SRX. “Looks like Gotham’s finest got an early start.”

They drove in silence for a bit. “You really don’t want to go tonight? Could you at least explain why? I thought partners told each other everything.”

“You never did tell me about your friend and that guy in college…” Deeks brought up.

“Really? Nice change of subject,” she answered. “Please, Deeks?”

“Kensi, what do we do for a living?”

She frowned at him. “Did you forget?”

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Memories by cuttestnik

“The best way to forget bad memories is by making good memories”

“Deeks at least tell me the reason why you don’t want to come,” said Kensi.

Okay, starting from the beginning, it’s Halloween and as we don’t have any case, Hetty has arranged a Halloween party for all of us; which I declined. So here I am, on my couch with my one and only partner, Kensi, trying to convince me to come with her. The problem here is I don’t celebrate Halloween- let’s just say some painful memories are associated with it.

So I answer her by saying, “Kensi, it’s a long story, I’ll tell you later on.”

I really like Kensi’s company and we have already planned to spend our Christmas together, but Halloween is a different story and right now, I just want to sit with Monty on my couch and drink beer and forget everything and for Kensi to go enjoy the party. But when has Kensi Blye ever done what I want?

Kensi answered me with, “No. I want to know the story right now.”

Why didn’t I see that coming?

“Kens, it’s a long story. Aren’t you getting late for the party?” I tell her, trying to change the subject.

Kensi gives me a roll of her eyes and then sighs and says, “I’m not going anywhere without you Deeks. And you know what, I am all ears Deeks.”

I sigh and realize that I am wasting our time and if Kensi wants to know something, she will have it her way and there is no way that she is letting this go. Also, if I tell her then she might understand and may not force me to go to the party. So just to tell her, I look at her, and find her looking at me with those mismatched eyes I love and all I find in them is concern and care for me.

I decided not to waste any more time and I tell her, “There was this one time, I was 11 years old and I wanted to go to my school’s Halloween party. We were poor at that time but I told my mom that I really wanted to go and I begged her to allow me and she did. Not only did she allow me to go but she brought a costume for me. I really don’t know what she did but she got me a superman costume for Halloween.”

I stop after saying this, tears were forming in my eyes and then I continued, “I was so happy Kensi, my mom and I were going to the party and dad…” I stopped again, not knowing what to say and then I continue again, “He was out with his friends and said he would come home late and thus we had decided to go and come back ASAP without him knowing. So my mom and I, we both were ready and I was wearing that superman costume mom brought for me and we were walking towards the door, smiling and before we reach for door, it opened up and he entered.”

To which Kensi softly asks, “Your father right?”

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Decidedly Deeks: Fanfic Challenge #1

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There is nothing more epic than a good challenge for a true NCISLA fan.

For November, we have a scintillating goal for those who can write out their thoughts about
Marty Deeks.

Behold.

THE CHALLENGE: Write a short fic about Deeks and Halloween. Tell us about his unknown fears, or how he faced his fears, or what it was like when Deeks participated in Halloween in the past.

Here are the RULES:

  1. Yes, we know Kensi is part of this equation, but we want the story focused on Deeks. Sorry, but no overt romance. Mention Kensi, yes, fine, great. But NO making out, gushy mush, or necking. If we judge the fic to have too much “romantic stuff” in it, it will be disqualified from getting mentioned. (Don’t get disqualified! We’re begging you!)
  2. Entries must be posted on Fanfiction.net with the words “NCISLAMagazine Deeks Challenge” in the description.
  3. No rated M entries allowed.
  4. All entries must be enabled to receive anonymous reviews.

 

CHALLENGE ENTRIES DUE BY NOVEMBER 20, 2013.

 

Winning entries will be featured on the Magazine.

 

Good luck!