Warning: This Challenge is based on the NCIS: Los Angeles Season Four episode named “Purity.” If you have not seen it, a part of it is revealed here. Repeat: Spoilers ahead. Do not read further unless you have seen episode 4×20.
Callen lovers, NCIS:LA fanfic writers, and everyone else, rejoice! I am posting our first Challenge!!! It’s an easy one, so I hope you’ll find an hour or so to sink your teeth into it. The winner gets something cool. (At least, I think it’s cool. If you don’t, that’s okay. You can send it back to me.)
THE CHALLENGE: WRITE A SHORT FIC ABOUT THE MISSING 2 HOURS IN EPISODE “PURITY.” [THE ENDCAPS FOR THE MISSING 2 HOURS ARE POSTED BELOW WITH CHARACTER CUES.] WRITE WHAT YOU BELIEVE HAPPENED DURING THOSE 2 HOURS. FOCUS, POINT OF VIEW, CAN BE FROM ANY OF THE CHARACTERS. POST YOUR PG-RATED ENTRY ON FANFICTION.NET BY APRIL 25, 2013 (YOUR TIMEZONE), AND PUT “NCISLA MAGAZINE CHALLENGE” IN THE SUMMARY. ALL SUBMISSIONS WILL BE LINKED TO ON THE MESSAGE BOARD.
Post in the comments if you think I’ve missed your submission.
Begin Endcaps with Character Cues
Sam Hanna approaches door. Hears sounds inside. Backs up, kicks in the door. [Camera pans from syringe on the floor, then to G Callen sitting on floor, leaning on a metal shelf, head sagging.]
G Callen: [Looks up at Sam, speech slurred] “What the hell took you so long?”
[Camera from Sam Hanna’s view, focuses on syringe on the ground]
Sam Hanna: [Looks at G and smiles] “You used the Hydroxyo- C.”
G Callen: [Raises eyebrows, attempts to sound upbeat, but voice is weak] “Worked like a charm.”
[[[MISSING TWO HOURS HERE]]]
[Camera zooms through exterior sky view to focus on the NCIS Office of Special Projects (Mission). Camera shows interior: armory room.]
Kensi Blye, Sam Hanna are at a near table, Marty Deeks and G Callen at far table. They are cleaning and loading their weapons.
Sam Hanna: “Ops is monitoring all water sensors and access points to underground utilities. And GWP is ready to cut off the water supply at a moment’s notice.”
Marty Deeks: “We’ve got local law enforcement and Kaleidoscope looking for ‘em. Eventually they’re going to have to show themselves.”
[Camera focuses on Callen struggling a bit with his weapon.]
G Callen drops the clip and a bullet rolls out. He reaches out and catches it, takes a frustrated breath.
Kensi Blye: “Callen, you sure you don’t want to guide us from Ops?”
G Callen: [Not making eye contact] “I’m fine.”
[Camera shot of Sam Hanna giving G Callen a concerned glance.]
Marty Deeks: “Yeah? ‘Cause a couple of hours ago you could barely move.”
G Callen: [turns and glares at Marty Deeks] “You want to arm wrestle?”
Marty Deeks: [smiles] “Fair enough.”
Great challenge. That is exactly what I missed in this episode. What happend after Sam found Callen and the preparation for finding the cyanide. Good that someone out there feels the same.
Thank you for the challenge though I am only a reader and not a writer.
Totally feel the same. (;
Well, I did it but haven’t seen the episode yet. So I’m hoping it’s ok. although from what I’ve read i’m really looking forward to watching it. Can’t wait to see what everyone comes up with.
Saw it! Got it! Putting it on the Board! (Link to the Board is above in the navigation bar.) Way to go!
Links to the stories of this first Callen’s Corner Challenge are on our board:
Well, I just loaded my story. I’ve never used fanfiction.net before so I hope I did it right. 🙂
DONE. This was a tough one. Looking forward to now reading the other entries!
Guess I could give it a go. Never done one before, looks fun. I think.
You totally should!
The Deadline is tomorrow (Thursday) at midnight, your time zone.
Write like the wind!!! (:
I can’t wait to find out who won! Tho-I am glad I’m not judging cause it would be too difficult! So many amazing writers here!